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Dipti  Vyas's avatar

This sits at the intersection of memoir and poetic indictment, and it does so with clarity and force, without sentimentality. The poem’s strongest asset is its refusal to simplify the complexity of trauma, identity, and memory, precisely the thing it says the “algorithm” wants.

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Hawtorn V. Rabot's avatar

I appreciate the close read.

Thank you.

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Anyone?

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The Mad Widow's avatar

I agree with Dipti.

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Hawtorn V. Rabot's avatar

Thank you.

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Hawtorn V. Rabot's avatar

Thank you.

I've written bars longer than I can remember.

I appreciate you noticing.

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