I think you eluded to some things before and I figured that's what it was about. I was just commenting the first thing that came to my mind. But there's a good rule in improv to not to go with the first thing that comes to your mind. 😞🤣🧑🎄
The confidence in your voice is compelling, but there’s also a steady, human honesty beneath it. What part of this awakening felt the hardest to put into words?
I like that you are trying poetry! It’s so freeing isn’t? Remember always, poetry is the deepest expression of human emotion in literary form. It’s the basis for songs, the shouting of hymns, the cries in the wilderness.
Gonna find out who's mayhem or not.
This is well beyond mayhem...
I think you eluded to some things before and I figured that's what it was about. I was just commenting the first thing that came to my mind. But there's a good rule in improv to not to go with the first thing that comes to your mind. 😞🤣🧑🎄
You’re fine!
I was amused.
I was hoping you would be. 💃
Boom
Pow!
Blammo!
This carries the weight of long-held truth and the moment before it’s spoken. Powerful.
You get it.
It's what I have to get to now.
Sigh.
You sound like your plotting evil
I'm the one guy standing up to it.
But invoke Santa's name?
It looks evil.
Im not invoking that name you know if you say it he shows up.
The confidence in your voice is compelling, but there’s also a steady, human honesty beneath it. What part of this awakening felt the hardest to put into words?
Remembering it.
Wow!
Thanks for sharing🫂
A dark rap Hawthorn is coming to town. Get ready for the reckoning.
Get ready.
@Laura B Writing in the Shadows and I rap battle.
In hell.
I love it! This is a great piece. I love your take on Santa.
Thank you.
But it's me and my whistleblowing list.
While it may be true as some say that I entered a special order of men who took a vow of obstinacy, I think you have outdone me!
Good stuff.
Thank you.
🔥🔥🔥
Thank you.
I really enjoyed that. Kind of a warning/precursor of what was to come in your posts here but written in an almost gentle poetic style.
Somewhat like calm before you got to work on that list and more ferocity and outright pain and darkness broke through more boldly.
It was a warning.
I never thought of it that way.
Thank you.
I like that you are trying poetry! It’s so freeing isn’t? Remember always, poetry is the deepest expression of human emotion in literary form. It’s the basis for songs, the shouting of hymns, the cries in the wilderness.
I've got some all around, but it's not a regular thing.
Is that image supposed to be a Santa version of yourself? 😂
🤣🤣
Dark Santa.
Anyone else?
There is a nice rhythm to this poem. It's got layers and a message that reflects the current time, suing the internet to speak about what you believe.
Thank you.
Sure? This one is rough. Do send me two pieces of yours please.
https://open.substack.com/pub/hawtornvrabot/p/locker-room?r=6f3qd6&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web